Okay, too much is too much.
This is the third crappy comment that I get in a short amount of time.
In the beginning I was finding this cute in a "noir" fairy tale retelling (not so original, and Kate Serine did it Way better!), but now, it seems that all there is to this, is stereotyped comments and characters.
I am THIS close to DNF the thing!
“Not a bad idea.” I rubbed my blue goatee. “But I have a better one.”
She smiled encouragingly.
“You stick to the girlie stuff like baking cookies and leave the investigating to me.”
As if the wannabe electric Smurf could talk.