Not bad, but...the idea of a Story who exists as a living entity who forces people into roles, isn't new.
Yes, there's significant differences from Mercedes Lackey, The Fairy Godmother _ adult story _ but _yet_ this isn't a story that constantly forces me to pick it up.
It has some good parts, but then there's this shadow of insta love _ it's complicated to explain without going into many details _ and I don't know -_-
I guess that without that Ya insta love _part was caused by despair and loneliness _ I wouldn't be having so many issues with it.
And I think I am starting to understand why the model has a red gown instead of the typical Cinderella blue gown.